I just thought that I would update everyone. I will be able to upload the next chapter on Thursday or Friday - I worked hard yesterday and finished chapter 12. I have been trying to run this particular chapter past a few people because it is definitely the most 'sciency' one yet. I was going to take the chapter further than it got, but I decided to break up the bulk of the science in two chapters.
I figured that there was more than enough to deal with here. Whew! I tried really hard to use analogies to make things clearer. I guess we'll all see later in the week. Anyway, prediction of scattered science storms ahead. I suggest private messaging and umbrellas.
p.s. EHfan, if you really want to know the paper I can send it your way