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Re: tigerlily124's story

Postby tigerlily124 » 09 May 2010, 15:35

Hi Joyce!

Thanks again for your reviews. I'm glad that people believed Hood's response to Rachel. Nope, the idea does not have to do with forgetting things. There was a clue planted in the interviews though. Thanks for reading!
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Re: tigerlily124's story

Postby kygal » 10 May 2010, 04:28

A clue huh...must go back and read again.
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Re: tigerlily124's story

Postby tigerlily124 » 10 May 2010, 07:33

*grins at kygal* I'll give you the answer to what the clue was in the next chapter (I think). The mists are beginning to clear, but there is a long way to go still. Thanks again for all of your reviews - it keeps me wanting to write more!
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Re: tigerlily124's story

Postby EHfan » 10 May 2010, 11:08

Like kygal I've gone back to re-read, but not quite sure what the clue is. Hmmm, could it be the coffee??? But then, how would the dog fit in? Hmm, have to think about this and re-read all the chapters.

Looking forward to the next chapter. And I'm glad to hear you want to keep on writing. It's nice to have a case-based fic.

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Re: tigerlily124's story

Postby tigerlily124 » 10 May 2010, 11:49

Hmm...perhaps I should qualify something. In the first chapter (as well as the interview chapter) there was a clue. The dog is separate from that particular clue, but both will be addressed in the next chapter. Phew! Lots of things to keep straight! I'm writing a few chapters ahead you see. :mrgreen:
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Re: tigerlily124's story

Postby tigerlily124 » 13 May 2010, 23:27

Hello again! "The time has come," the Walrus said...wait a minute, that's not right. Oh. Anyway, there is another chapter of my story up on FF.net. Let me know what you think!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5900326/7/

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Re: tigerlily124's story

Postby kygal » 14 May 2010, 04:59

Thanks for the plug Tiger! I keep thinking...what the heck is going on. I cant figure it out yet. They all have animals...does it have to do with fleas or ticks???? I am certainly looking forward to more of this story.
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Re: tigerlily124's story

Postby EHfan » 14 May 2010, 07:03

tigerlily124 wrote:"The time has come," the Walrus said...wait a minute, that's not right.

Well, almost, And I love Lewis Carroll!

This chapter was great - loved the science, almost like watching an episode of the series. Umm, going to have to spend some time on the 'net today. See what I can come up with in the way of clues as to what is happening.

And I liked the way you had Hood lie to the dad. He especially would know how "what if's" can haunt a person.

Can't wait until next Friday!

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Re: tigerlily124's story

Postby tigerlily124 » 14 May 2010, 11:06

Thanks again for reading guys! I am having fun with this story!

EHfan ~ I loved that scene with Hood also. I really felt like that fit well with his character. Thanks for the compliments!!!!!!!
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Re: tigerlily124's story

Postby tigerlily124 » 21 May 2010, 12:52

Hello all you happy people! I have posted the next chapter of the story on FF.net. I would just like to offer my sincere thanks to both EHfan and kygal for being faithful reviewers. Happy reading everyone! :D

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5900326/8/
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Re: tigerlily124's story

Postby kygal » 21 May 2010, 17:38

Gene Therapy case...I have no idea what is going on...thought I may have an idea but now I dont. Great writing style and very true to characters. I can just see Hood and Rachel trying to keep up with nurse Alma. Surprised Rachel didnt shoot her..ha,ha.I cant help but like her...I know someone who acts like her. Looking forward to the next chapter. Hope there are more than 10!
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Re: tigerlily124's story

Postby tigerlily124 » 22 May 2010, 13:00

Thanks again kygal (both for your review here and over at FF.net). They make my day! Yeah, Nurse Alma is fun to write. As you can probably imagine though, we are building up to a grand blowup involving Alma. =) Thanks again for everything that you said! Have a great day!
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Re: tigerlily124's story

Postby EHfan » 22 May 2010, 15:20

Tiger,
tigerlily124 wrote:Nurse Alma is fun to write. As you can probably imagine though, we are building up to a grand blowup involving Alma. =)

So, you gonna let Rachel shoot her or what? At least let Rachel deck her for being rude to Hood.

The last chapter was interesting. Have to go back and re-read everything to see if I can figure out where you're going. Most likely not, but it's fun trying. I'll leave a review over at ff.net later, haven't had time today. But, rest assured, even if you don't get a ton of reviews, you ARE being read.

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Re: tigerlily124's story

Postby tigerlily124 » 22 May 2010, 15:23

Thank you very much EHfan! I appreciate it. No, Rachel isn't going to shoot Nurse Alma. She might get into trouble with her boss over that one =). I think that you guys will like what does happen though. I appreciate all of your comments and support. Thanks again!
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Re: tigerlily124's story

Postby kygal » 23 May 2010, 06:53

Keep up the great work. Like Joyce said...you are being read! I read everything but dont always leave a review, except you guys here and ADOF(one of my faves).
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Re: tigerlily124's story

Postby EHfan » 23 May 2010, 07:22

tigerlily124 wrote:No, Rachel isn't going to shoot Nurse Alma. She might get into trouble with her boss over that one =).

Tiger,

Two words for you - 'accidental discharge'! I'm sure Hood, heck the whole hospital, will back her up on this one!

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Re: tigerlily124's story

Postby tigerlily124 » 24 May 2010, 07:47

Thank you both again!

Very funny EHfan :lol: ! I think that you're right about that. Don't worry - I don't think that you'll be disappointed. :mrgreen:
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Re: tigerlily124's story

Postby tigerlily124 » 28 May 2010, 21:06

Hey guys! The next chapter of 'Potential' is up. Let me know what you think and thank you all in advance!
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5900326/9/[/url]
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Re: tigerlily124's story

Postby EHfan » 29 May 2010, 06:31

Tiger,

I still say Rachel should have shot her!

Seriously, good to see Alma get her butt handed to her. And for all those people out there who think that the Alma character is unrealistic and that she would have been fired years ago, no. Trust me, I've had to fire people and it ain't easy - and I'm not just talking the emotional costs. Just fired someone a few months ago that had been an unsatisfactory employee for 9 years - sometimes you need something like what Alma did in this scene to tip the balance and get their sorry asses fired.

I have only one minor quibble with this chapter. You describe Rachel's smile as "hang-dog." That phrase denotes depressed, in this situation I can more readily imagine Rachel smiling wolfishly. She really, really want a piece of this woman, probably wishing that Alma would try to slap Hood giving her an excuse to deck Alma.

So, looking forward to the next chapter.

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Re: tigerlily124's story

Postby kygal » 29 May 2010, 07:03

I agree with Joyce...I do know people like nurse alma and they are still employed. Enjoyed the chapter very much. Loved the humor at the end. Still cant figure out the case...but making me think!
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Re: tigerlily124's story

Postby tigerlily124 » 31 May 2010, 14:45

Hey guys! Thank you very much for all of your reviews! I am really, really glad to have them. Yeah, I enjoyed the Alma scene also. There always seem to be a few people like Alma in the woodwork.

p.s. Joyce, you were right about 'hang dog' I had the meaning mixed up :oops: . I went back and fixed it. Thanks!

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Re: tigerlily124's story

Postby tigerlily124 » 04 Jun 2010, 11:24

Hellooooo!

I just posted chapter 10 of my story on FF.net. I hope that everyone likes it! Please let me know what you think - it keeps me motivated to write. I would really like to thank EHfan and kygal for their consistent reviews and also numbat! You guys are the best! Enjoy!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5900326/10/
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Re: tigerlily124's story

Postby EHfan » 04 Jun 2010, 17:36

Tiger,

Sooo, that's what you meant when you said the dog was involved, but not in the way I might think. You were right, I never considered fleas! Hmm, must google flea borne illnesses.

A good chapter. I'm enjoying your secondary characters. First Alma and now Dawn. You're doing a good job of injecting some humor into a serious story, just as they did on the series.

Hope you have good weather for your party this weekend. Enjoy yourself!

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Re: tigerlily124's story

Postby kygal » 05 Jun 2010, 07:59

As I said in my review. Love the humor you place in between the science! Hood seems very worried about his current findings...of course I am puzzled. Keep up the great work!
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Re: tigerlily124's story

Postby tigerlily124 » 07 Jun 2010, 08:14

Hello again! Thank you two for continuing to review - I really appreciate it. I did have fun writing Dawn - I think that everyone has run into someone like that. Ah the ditzy suicide blond :roll:.
I really am glad that people are enjoying my secondary characters too! That makes me very happy. I'm also glad that people like the humor.

I used to have a genetics class that required a paper a week. I got bored writing them and I started ending my papers with a punchline. But what I didn't realize at the time was that my professor didn't read all of the papers - he just skimmed them. People got away with putting bits of previous papers in the center of the current paper. So the end result of my punchlines at the end was that my professor never failed to read my paper :lol: . Oh well, it was fun anyway.

Thanks again guys! You're the best!
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