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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby EHfan » 17 Jan 2010, 11:55

ObsidianJade wrote:I have been working on something else, but unfortunately (by your estimation, at least, :lol: ), it's another Bleach story, sorry. That one, however, is only two chapters and will be posted shortly.

No, no, no, I meant work on something not only non-Bleach, but something you really don't care about. So that means obviously no EH! See, I told you this wasn't an evil plot to get you back writing EH. When you write just to write, it can sometimes free up your mind when you get back to what you care about. Sort of freeing up your subconscious by forcing your consious mind to work on something else.

EHfan wrote:I'll be in Lynchburg in March. Maybe I will look you up.

ObsidianJade wrote:Do! It would be great to have a chance to meet you. (laughs) By then I should have a few EH stories to bounce off of you, too.

That would be cool - I'll be in touch closer to the date.

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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 17 Jan 2010, 17:29

That's my problem - I care about everything I write! :lol: Even my absurd, off-the-wall, total-WTF crack fics, I care about. Mostly I care that they go away and leave me alone, but still, I care.

(I never *try* to write crack. It sneaks up and ambushes me when I'm not looking.)

Usually when I hit a roadblock, it's only for a particular story - if I go with one train of thought for too long, it gets a little bogged down, so if I go to a different story (even if it's within the same series), I can usually get unstuck. I've only had really serious writer's block (as in, stare at the computer for two hours, manage to type two sentences that don't even make sense and I'm forced to delete) a couple of times in my life, and would be quite content if that remains the sum total of my experience with it.

It usually comes around when I'm trying *not* to write a specific story (sometimes I get ambushed by a plot bunny I just do not want to deal with - usually character death ones), so I'll try to avoid that particular story. That was why I stopped writing EH fics for a while last year - had a bad bunny show up, although I think (due entirely to Latte's help) I managed to mutate it to the point I'm willing to work with it. I may still go back to it at some point in the future.... it's angst, but redeemable angst.

And, definitely! Drop me a PM or an email. Something to look forward to!
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 20 Jan 2010, 18:42

Second chapter of RDBH has been posted! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5665175/2/R ... lack_Honor

Joyce and KY, I gave you a quick mention (though not by name) in the notes in thanks for your support. I know I've said it before, but I really can't express how much it means to me that you're willing to read it. Thank you!
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby kygal » 21 Jan 2010, 05:39

Thank you so much Jade...what an honor. Wonderful work as always!
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby EHfan » 21 Jan 2010, 11:21

Ok, I'm actually getting fascinated by this story. Don't get all the references,but I get the gist of it, and it's quite, quite, good. I think I like these people!

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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 21 Jan 2010, 15:15

:D :D :D

You just made my day, Joyce. And by all means, feel free to email/PM me (Ensignbiki@aol.com) if you want me to explain anything.

Bleach is terribly addictive, :lol: , and a lot of that is the interplay of the characters. I gradually expand the focus of the story outwards to include more and more people, although Byakuya and Renji will remain at the core of it (even the title is a reference to the two of them). Kubo-san has a remarkable ability to create realistic and lovable (or at least relateable and appreciable) characters, and I can only hope I'm doing them all justice.

I have to admit that one of my favorite chapters so far is twelve, because the first half of it is written more or less from the POV of a character named Ayasegawa Yumichika. He's an effeminate, narcissistic, arrogant jerk, and he's an absolute blast to write, :lol: . http://bleach.wikia.com/wiki/Yumichika_Ayasegawa

And the second half I get very mean to poor Kira, even if it is all for his own good. He has too may issues. http://bleach.wikia.com/wiki/Izuru_Kira
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 27 Jan 2010, 16:05

Third chapter of RDBH has been posted, went up a few hours early today for no particular reason.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5665175/3/R ... lack_Honor
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby kygal » 27 Jan 2010, 16:57

Jade...you have great writing style! I look forward to more chapters . Dont get me wrong...I want some more EH stuff out of you...very soon please...but I am equally enjoying this as well! Selfish as usual...I want more of both!
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 27 Jan 2010, 17:17

(beams)

You guys are too good to me. And hopefully I'll be getting back to EH soon (I know I've been saying that for months, but soon is getting sooner. Really.)

So glad you're enjoying it so far! RDBH will stay on a weekly update schedule (through chapter ten or so, at any rate - I may double a couple of chapters around that point because they're mostly filler and not as good..)
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby EHfan » 28 Jan 2010, 06:44

A little to short for me! But glad to hear about your update schedule. Seriously though, I liked this addition. I can see some possibilities opening up - you're developing things well.

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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 28 Jan 2010, 07:34

...well, I'm obviously doing something right if a 2,700 word chapter is 'short,' :lol: . All of the chapters in RDBH are between 2,500 - 4k words, (actually, I think only the interlude after ch 10 is 4k - the rest are shorter...) but thank you!

I love Gin (despite his sociopathic bastard-ness), so I was glad to get this chapter up. And trust me, plenty more possibilities will be in the offing, :D .

And those of you following via use of the Bleach Wikia might want to brush up on their Visoreds before ch 5, although only Kensei and Shinji make physical appearances. :D :D :D
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 31 Jan 2010, 11:53

Kubo-san is kind enough to give us the birthdays of most of his characters, so it's kind of a tradition for Bleach writers to do a little something for their fave characters on their B-days. Byakuya's happens to be today... so I gave him Renji, :lol:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5706711/1/The_First_Day

It's not connected with RDBH, but it was just a fun little piece I couldn't resist writing. It actually started with the ending, and the rest of it came about who-knows-how.
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby kygal » 01 Feb 2010, 05:15

I liked it! Very entertaining.
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 03 Feb 2010, 11:34

RDBH chapter Four is posted - not my most-favorite of favorites, but I do adore Kira.

http://bleach.wikia.com/wiki/Izuru_Kira
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby EHfan » 03 Feb 2010, 17:21

Not bad, but need more Renji!

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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 03 Feb 2010, 17:53

(bursts out laughing) Nice to know you've picked a favorite already! And no worries, next chapter has a good bit of Renji, although it's (supposed to be) dedicated to Shuuhei.

However, it's bloody, sweaty, and in-a-hot-springs Renji, so that should satisfy you for a little bit, :D Bankai training is hard work, so there's plenty of sweat tracing pathways down that gloriously sculpted, tattooed flesh. (drools)
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 08 Feb 2010, 22:16

Heh, looks like you get your Renji fix a little early, Joyce: I'm posting ahead of schedule because the forecast is calling for ice, and I'd rather not be fretting over it if we wind up losing power.

Really. I would really rather it rained sardines. And that's saying something, because I hate sardines.

In any case!!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5665175/5/R ... lack_Honor

Thanks, guys!
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby EHfan » 10 Feb 2010, 09:37

Nice addition to the story. Hope your the storm hasn't hit you to badly. Stay safe and warm!

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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 10 Feb 2010, 10:13

Actually, we got through it just fine. Warm is a challenge, though; the wind today is brutal, and it's not going to get above 28F. Nasty!

Although I can just imagine going and joining Renji and Shuuhei in that hot spring... that thought warms me up quite nicely, :lol:
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby kygal » 10 Feb 2010, 16:01

Very nice. Starting to get addicted to this story. BUT...I did read- over the weekend -some of your old EH fanfics...Percocet, Handcuffs, and Scorned...loved them all over again! Would love another EH story out of you when you thaw out and have some time or inspiration...hint...hint...beg...beg!
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 10 Feb 2010, 20:16

Thank you very much! You really have no idea how much that means to me.

I will definitely keep that in mind, I'm hitting a slow spot mentally with RDBH (not to worry about the posting schedule, though; the slow spot I hit working on ch. 16...), so switching to another genre for a week or so might help.

Not tonight, however. This effing snow is causing issues - and our insurance company is going to hate us in the morning, :roll:
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby EHfan » 10 Feb 2010, 21:01

Much as I'm sorry to hear about your writer's block, glad to think you might return to EH fanfic to help clear your head.

Sorry to hear that you got more snow - we only had 4 inches (I can't believe I just used the word only in front of 4 inches of snow!!!).

Hope the insurance issues work themselves out.

Take care,

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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby EHfan » 10 Feb 2010, 21:02

Much as I'm sorry to hear about your writer's block, glad to think you might return to EH fanfic to help clear your head.

Sorry to hear that you got more snow - we only had 4 inches (I can't believe I just used the word only in front of 4 inches of snow!!!).

Hope the insurance issues work themselves out.

Take care,

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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 10 Feb 2010, 21:13

Not block so much.... just a slow spot. Still making progress in the story, but not as quickly as I was originally. (I wrote eleven chapters of it, in their entirety, in the month of December. Since the new year, I've only managed six... then again, I have been a little distracted.)

The actual amount of snow we got was minimal, the problem was the ice that accompanied it. Our road is on a hill and virtually impassable, we had one outbuilding fall down on Saturday, and it's now looking like our garage is at risk as well. (sighs) This is what we get for liking old houses so much, I suppose.

Aaaand I spent three hours plus shoveling aforementioned heavy, icy snow, and I'm going to be one head-to-foot ache in the morning. I've gotten out of shape.... :cry:

Wow, complain much? (laughs) Ah, life is good. I have family, friends and fanfiction.

Edit: Okay, just to add to the general weirdness of the day... I just got a letter offering me membership to AARP.

This is very weird, because I'm twenty-five. Obviously someone needs reading glasses.....
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 17 Feb 2010, 07:33

Chapter Six of RDBH is up, and I'm excited, because this means I'm only a little way away from posting Chapter SEVEN!!! (Chapter 7 is a monumental chapter in terms of plot development. And I lii~iike it, :D )

Mind you, I like Ch. 6 well enough, too. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5665175/6/
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