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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby æthre » 29 May 2009, 23:27

Stuck at a boring part with the director... still. Would skip past that part, but then I'll never, ever write it.
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 29 May 2009, 23:29

Well, if I can send you RiS for a quick Beta, I'm happy to return the favor. Maybe I can get you unstuck?
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby æthre » 29 May 2009, 23:47

Sure! Mostly, I have... well, no idea what to do. Basically, the director has to give 'em a case that's entirely political in nature, Hood isn't impressed, Rachel just shrugs it off and Felix finds it amusing that he gets to possibly see the important people's dirty laundry. (Especially since the case they're taking has been pretty highly publicised - teenaged kids of politicians having very public sex and they're not the kids you'd think would do that - and they just saw a bit of the case in action.)

'cept I have no idea how to start... and I don't think I even have a digital copy of what I've written thus so far... I think it's all on paper >.>;
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 29 May 2009, 23:50

All of my stuff starts out on paper, it's much easier for me to write that way still.

Also, my first fully typed draft of RiS is now complete, I'll go over it again tomorrow to check for continuity and editing. Can I send you a copy for review tomorrow night? Oh, and do you have support for .pages documents? If not... I do have NeoOffice. (grumbles)
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby æthre » 29 May 2009, 23:59

I'm sure I can find a converter if I don't, XD As always, leave the techy stuff to me, XD You can, however, save as .doc in that program, Sarah. The internet tells me this, lawl!
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 30 May 2009, 00:01

In... what? Neo? (Follow the white rabbit... yeah) Its default save is .odt or something of that nature.... and FF.net has high support for that, so, whatever. The comp is still fast, and I have not lost (or rather, I have regained) my ability to post. So, s'all good.
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby æthre » 30 May 2009, 10:42

Ah, no, in whichever program you're using that saves as .pages. Very rarely do programs only save in one file type - if you can only save as one file type, it's a program of fail, XD

I'd just buy MS Office for Mac, really. But I'm attached to Word.
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 30 May 2009, 11:09

I'm using iWork's Pages program, and I find it a perfectly acceptable subsitute for Word, really. I don't have the disposable income to upgrade my computer with every breath I take, unfortunately, so I have to work with what I've got. :D

I will definetly look into getting those to save as .docs. If I can get it to work, that means I can get rid of NeoOffice again and have fewer things taking up disk space, yay!
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby æthre » 30 May 2009, 11:23

XD I have disposable income, but I've worked a hell of a lot to get it. I've definitely spent too much this month, though... what with the Sims, 130 dollars worth of books, a printer/scanner, the usb cable for the printer (rip off!) and Firefly...

But, yes, Pages saves as .doc. http://forums.macrumors.com/showthread.php?t=256962
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 30 May 2009, 12:34

Haha, thanks! Now I owe you two chapters.... :lol:
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby æthre » 30 May 2009, 12:38

Moo haa haa.
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 30 May 2009, 16:47

So, Nikki, how awful is it?
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby æthre » 30 May 2009, 16:49

The opposite of awful? I just finished a grammar sweep and will read it over again in a few - I got your email about ten minutes from the end of an episode of SG-1 so I'm just finishing that up now :3
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 30 May 2009, 16:52

I'm not so much worried about the grammar, I'm more so-much worried about 'does this sound stilted and idiotic?'

Thanks for the 'not awful,' though! :)
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby æthre » 30 May 2009, 16:55

Oh, I know that, I just can't help but fix grammar >.>; it's my default state of being.

And it's not stilted and idiotic in the slightest, Sarah, XD
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 30 May 2009, 16:57

Good place to start! Ideal would be 'hot enough to melt the computer screen,' but I'm not that good, :lol:
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby æthre » 30 May 2009, 17:04

Hood getting his revenge was very yummy :3 And shivery <3
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 30 May 2009, 17:09

Shivery is good. That means you felt what I felt. Very much with the shivers.
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby æthre » 30 May 2009, 17:28

Mmhmm!
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 30 May 2009, 19:33

Well, ladies, (and gentlemen?) I've finally done it! Not only my first M-rated fic, (yes, it's Freak-safe!) but the only story that's ever had me blushing from the keyboard.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5099837/1/

Enjoy! And please give me your honest thoughts on this one, I really have no idea what I'm doing with this.
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby æthre » 30 May 2009, 20:11

Honest thoughts? Hood. Handcuffs. *thud*

(for some reason there, I almost wrote handffucs... *snort* Dyslexic in a pervy way? Maaaaybe.)
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 30 May 2009, 20:16

It's odd that you should say that, I've been typing 'handf-', stopping and correcting myself... wonder if I would have written the same thing?

And thank you, that's kind of what I was aiming for!!
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby æthre » 30 May 2009, 20:23

I got up to handffu before stopping myself, XD Buuut it's pretty obvious what I was gunna write, XD
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby rueful2 » 30 May 2009, 22:01

Wow, Sarah, fantastic!!! I thought everyone was very true to character. And the ending was hot with a capital, OH MY GOD!
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Re: ObsidianJade's Stories

Postby ObsidianJade » 30 May 2009, 22:04

:oops: :D

Wow, really?!
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